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Not My Mother -WIP- by KimMcCloud Not My Mother -WIP- by KimMcCloud
Judas fighting a homonculi ver of his mother


I suck at backgrounds, but I want to try to tackle doing a decent one with this piece. So it's going to take quite a while. XD

You might as well call Judas, "Shiki ver 2.0" :iconxd-plz:

PS. coloring with black a lot lately XD

Judas belongs to ~Blacklisted23
Homonculi Winny (c) M3
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ExorOmega Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the posing and the gradient, as well as how clean cut everything is.  It's also really cool how the homonculus is taking the hit with a sort of unprepared surprise that he would actually be able to kill her.  I think it's going to take more to end her, judging by this image alone - excellent work!

The only critique I have as a combat buff is that the position of his sword hand makes it look like he's holding the weapon with a D-type grip (the sort you'd find on a drawer or refrigerator) as opposed to the standard grip on a sword.  Although you would see a little of the grip, you wouldn't see much of his pointer finder at all.  I think all you need to do to fix it is to bring the line bridging his finger to his thumb up closer to the hilt, lower the angle down to his wrist, and maybe shorten the line of his pointer knuckle.
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I like the angle of his face, the position his body is in and the pose of his hands. Really nice.
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KimMcCloud Jul 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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